Awesome short story. Zhane’s boyfriend breaks up with her on the night she thinks he’s going to ask for her hand in marriage. Devlin Hart, a popular radio show host, influenced her boyfriend’s decision. Her boyfriend kept quoting Devlin. “Devlin Hart says…” this and “Devlin Hart says…” that. It was hilarious, and the more she thought about it, the more she wanted to confront Mr. Devlin Hart. So she ends up driving to the radio station in the middle of a storm to confront the radio show host.
When they meet, Zhane and Devlin are immediately attracted to each other, and when the elevator got stuck, it was on! First they argued like bitter enemies. Then they had hot, spontaneous sex. Whew! Afterward, I needed a cigarette.
This was a funny and sexy story with witty dialogue. Well done.
-Reviewed by Delaney